6 thoughts on “Page 59

  1. Daniel

    Small criticism: For sequences like the top right panel, you should either have the feet lift up more (if the character is jumping over), or you should have them switch feet. Right now it looks like she makes 5 small teleports to get across the room.

  2. steven Post author

    Ok I fixed the laser beam direction, but haven’t yet found the time to fix the leg positions in the second panel, I’ll try to do that too


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