I never thought I’d have the nerve to do a crit of Steven’s drawing but…
In the final pane, Lisa’s face is pointing quite a ways off the reader’s right shoulder but the eyes are looking this way. If the drawing standard weren’t always such top quality, it wouldn’t be evident as it can be much more that one or two mm off.
As for crits, everyone makes mistakes including my hero Frank Frazetta 🙂 I certainly make lots of them.
In this case I’m going for – she’s recording a selfie using her finger-tip camera, that probably doesn’t come across, since I didn’t show it or explain it. Maybe in the next frame I can show the setup
To me, this seems like an image from a happier time, captured and stored by Lisa as a fond memory.
I am wondering, if we were able to do a “Hollywood” zoom and enhance, would we see Elvis reflected in Lisa’s eyes.
Unfortunately, this also seems to be a wrapper page to circle back to the beginning of the comic. Which makes me sad. I would love to see more of this world. There are still some plot points to wrap up, but having everything tied up with a neat little bow is not really necessary for a complete story.
Helluva ride Steven, well done.
I never thought I’d have the nerve to do a crit of Steven’s drawing but…
In the final pane, Lisa’s face is pointing quite a ways off the reader’s right shoulder but the eyes are looking this way. If the drawing standard weren’t always such top quality, it wouldn’t be evident as it can be much more that one or two mm off.
Or is it just me?
As for crits, everyone makes mistakes including my hero Frank Frazetta 🙂 I certainly make lots of them.
In this case I’m going for – she’s recording a selfie using her finger-tip camera, that probably doesn’t come across, since I didn’t show it or explain it. Maybe in the next frame I can show the setup
Just you!
To me, this seems like an image from a happier time, captured and stored by Lisa as a fond memory.
I am wondering, if we were able to do a “Hollywood” zoom and enhance, would we see Elvis reflected in Lisa’s eyes.
Unfortunately, this also seems to be a wrapper page to circle back to the beginning of the comic. Which makes me sad. I would love to see more of this world. There are still some plot points to wrap up, but having everything tied up with a neat little bow is not really necessary for a complete story.
Helluva ride Steven, well done.