8 thoughts on “Page 302

    1. Aname

      Not a good choice, it would be fully lojacked and have remote engine disabling and remote door locking.
      Lisa wouldnt be trapped in it for long, but she wouldnt get very far in it either.

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      1. Thracecius

        We’re talking about an android who can hack nearly anything, so unless the author makes it impossible for her, I don’t think it would present much difficulty.

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  1. steven Post author

    okay, true in principle, authors can twist stuff around to make things go ANY way they want, or need… but I hate it when I notice this happening in stories, so I want to minimize it 🙂

    edit: ok I just uploaded 303, and made a small edit to 302 (reload it if it still shows the old page). Let me know what you think thanks 🙂

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    1. Observer

      I thought it was going to be one of those spot the missing spot on the dalmatian on the right, but I think I found it. Is it the GUN GUN GUN thought bubble? Yes, it was needed as otherwise it did look like Lisa was about to do a gymnastics floor exercise.

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      1. steven Post author

        Yes that’s right 🙂
        btw I’m not happy with page 303, I think I’ll have to do some major surgery and editing, probably including spreading half of it out into page 304… too many disparate elements and story beats happening too close together

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