Tiny continuity error: in panel 3, Lisa’s top has arm holes but on panels 8 and 9 and on previous pages, it is a halter neck.
A more significant problem for me was that the shot from the drone bounced off. I don’t understand why you did that? We know from page 142 that her kind can take such hits and recover, so she could be wounded and still take out the drone. And maybe Elvis might show some TLC rather than just sit there eating pot noodle. But hey, it’s your story, when I can draw like you can, I can criticize. Yeah, right.
By the way, loved the laser bindi on the police officer’s forehead.
You’re right on both counts, thanks I fixed it.
“And maybe Elvis might show some TLC rather than just sit there eating pot noodle.” I meant it would give him a reason to show some TLC. After the heavy lifting is done, obviously.
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