Small criticism: For sequences like the top right panel, you should either have the feet lift up more (if the character is jumping over), or you should have them switch feet. Right now it looks like she makes 5 small teleports to get across the room.
Okay.
Looks like a trap.
Where is his laser beam going? Towards a floor below her?
Yeah I made a mistake there sorry, I need to fix it, the beam needs to be angled up instead 🙂
Small criticism: For sequences like the top right panel, you should either have the feet lift up more (if the character is jumping over), or you should have them switch feet. Right now it looks like she makes 5 small teleports to get across the room.
Good point! I’ll keep it in mind, and I’ll try to find some time to fix it thanks 🙂
Ok I fixed the laser beam direction, but haven’t yet found the time to fix the leg positions in the second panel, I’ll try to do that too
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