Well that was unexpected!
On a technical note: for the speech bubbles in the last panel, you use the ‘splash’ technique to suggest that the sound is coming through the door. But the two heads in the foreground can’t be Lisa and Elvis because “Lisa has left the building”. Was this intentional?
oh sorry, I didn’t make it clear enough, she didn’t actually jump out the window, she just went through in her head what may be about to happen… I have to see if I can improve this page somehow
A “thought bubbly” of border on the panel would probably work
yes thanks I think so too, I made a change, if you refresh the page you should see it, hope it works better now 🙂
Yes, it is better now.
Also, I missed the contraction of “I would” to “I’d”.
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